Journey of Del Pt. 3

Started by Lance, January 09, 2009, 01:29:20 AM

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January 09, 2009, 01:29:20 AM Last Edit: November 30, 2010, 02:17:56 PM by Lance
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January 09, 2009, 03:37:05 PM
This is a great story.
I really like Del and, like David said, "What happens next?" I like the way you switch from present to past and fill in the blank spots of Del's journey.

I look forward to reading more of this story.

Thanks for posting it.
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