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Role Playing => Gaming Tales => Topic started by: Lance on January 09, 2009, 01:29:20 AM

Title: Journey of Del Pt. 3
Post by: Lance on January 09, 2009, 01:29:20 AM
Currently Revising
Title: Re: Journey of Del Pt. 3
Post by: Golanthius on January 09, 2009, 03:37:05 PM
This is a great story.
I really like Del and, like David said, "What happens next?" I like the way you switch from present to past and fill in the blank spots of Del's journey.

I look forward to reading more of this story.

Thanks for posting it.